Thursday, January 10, 2008

My try at poetry.....

Hmmmm.....I've posted around 28 posts and it is some eight months since i got myself acquainted to the site blogger......But,first of all,i don't think there's any reason for me to forget this....'twas one of ma friends who inspired me in doing this and i've Neva looked back since.....honestly,i thank you,if you are reading this...and once again he has got something up his sleeve to inspire me(don think am trying to imitate you...) if you all want to know who and what am referring to check this out:
http://vinodh90.blogspot.com/
i just completed reading "THE CHILDREN OF HURIN",one more of the awesome works of Tolkien on the middle earth,but it revolves around the ill fate of the kin of Hurin(one of the kings) made to fall on them by Morgoth(mightier than Sauron of "the lord of the rings"..... And i got the idea of writing a poem just about something related to it...forgive me if am not good enough for you to have wasted your time on this....
The Morning is coming.....

Look at yourself,think of the deeds you have done...
Good,bad or whatever they may be...
Think of what made you do them,and what they made to others..
Fair as an elf,you would be if they were good...
Dark as the towers of the north you would be,if they were fully bad...
Don't you dread yourself?? for you are none among both...
What you did were neither good,nor bad were they,completely.....
We have no Morgoth,to choose our fate...
Nor do we have the elf queen MELIAN to save us from the darkness..
What we think decides what we do...
what we do decides what we will be..
Give heed to fear and counsel,
but don't let them take control of you...
Don't flee your friends,at the sight of your mightier enemy,
you might be stabbed on the back by one of them..
Never forget the past or the future,
for they decide what is your present...
Think of all these while seeing yourself at the mirror,
Morning is not far away......

I don't think there should be any need for explaining these lines...this is ma tribute to 'Turin,son of hurin...the victim of fate.......

1 comment:

Vinodh said...

awesome stuff!
it is actually a privilege to learn the fact that i have acted as the source of your inspiration..

keep writing...